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http://www.stephenfrug.com describes a comic book with a creative commons license, but I'm more interested in movies, so this is an adapation:


<screenplay>Continuity</screenplay>
<fountain>


<scene int day>Boarding House Room</scene>
Title: Continuity
Author: Stephen Frug


[[Jack a.k.a. Conflagration|JACK]], a fit young man, early 20's, sits on the corner of a well made bed in the back of his boarding house room.  He's wearing only briefs, holding a COSTUME loose in his hands.  In front of him is a closed closet door, with a FULL LENGTH MIRROR on it. The man looking both at the costume and, beyond it, at the mirror. In the mirror, rather than an accurate reflection of the scene before us, we see the man actually wearing the costume, in a heroic pose. The costume itself is, pretty standard superhero fare: a skintight costume covering all but the eyes and jaw, in a standard two-color scheme: white with gold gloves, boots, belt, insignia, etc. The insignia is a starburst or flame of some sort, to go with his name and power.  [[JACK]] is considering how he'll look in the costume as opening theme/credits play.
INT DAY Boarding House Room


Behind [[JACK]], in the front of the room, [[THE TRAVELER]] is sitting in a chair. We are looking over his shoulder, so that all we see is his shoulder, an arm, the back of his head. So far as we can see, he is dressed all in black: black clothes, black mask. He is a brooding, ominous presence, one that the brighter and sunnier (though pensive) man he watches is utterly unaware of.
JACK a.k.a. Conflagration, a fit young man, early 20's, sits on the corner of a well made bed in the back of his boarding house room.  He's wearing only briefs, holding a COSTUME loose in his hands.  In front of him is a closed closet door, with a FULL LENGTH MIRROR on it. The man looking both at the costume and, beyond it, at the mirror. In the mirror, rather than an accurate reflection of the scene before us, we see the man actually wearing the costume, in a heroic pose. The costume itself is, pretty standard superhero fare: a skintight costume covering all but the eyes and jaw, in a standard two-color scheme: white with gold gloves, boots, belt, insignia, etc. The insignia is a starburst or flame of some sort, to go with his name and power.  JACK is considering how he'll look in the costume as opening theme/credits play.


On the floor between them is the shadow of [[THE TRAVELER]], stretching out toward [[JACK]]... except that, instead of an ordinary shadow, we see, as a simple, shadow-colored SILHOUETTE, a collage of the incidents described later: [[THE TRAVELER]] preventing the rise of the heroes and villains of entire world.
Behind JACK, in the front of the room, TRAVELER is sitting in a chair.  We are looking over his shoulder, so that all we see is his shoulder, an arm, the back of his head. So far as we can see, he is dressed all in black: black clothes, black mask. He is a brooding, ominous presence, one that the brighter and sunnier (though pensive) man he watches is utterly unaware of.


<scene int day>Boarding House Room</scene>
On the floor between them is the shadow of TRAVELER, stretching out toward JACK... except that, instead of an ordinary shadow, we see, as a simple, shadow-colored SILHOUETTE, a collage of the incidents described later: TRAVELER preventing the rise of the heroes and villains of entire world.


[[JACK]] is pensive; he holds up the costume by the shoulders and looks it over, then with grim determination, starts putting on the costume.
INT DAY Boarding House Room


<scene int day>Boarding House Room</scene>
JACK is pensive; he holds up the costume by the shoulders and looks it over, then with grim determination, starts putting on the costume.


From low, looking up at the mirror, we see [[JACK]] finishing donning his costume by putting on his boots, leaving only the gloves for last.  In the reflection, we can see an ARMCHAIR at the front of the room, empty.
INT DAY Boarding House Room


<scene int day>Boarding House Room</scene>
From low, looking up at the mirror, we see JACK finishing donning his costume by putting on his boots, leaving only the gloves for last.  In the reflection, we can see an ARMCHAIR at the front of the room, empty.


Same angle, [[JACK]] has put the boots on, and is now donning the gloves, however now, [[THE TRAVELLER]] occupies the armchair we see in the reflection.  For the most part, he is dressed in ordinary clothes: a button-down shirt, slacks, a belt, a trench coat loose and open over all of that, standard-looking shoes -- but all sooty black.  Under his clothes, however, [[THE TRAVELLER]] wears a skin-tight, all-black costume: of course this only shows with his hands, which are covered in sheer black gloves, and his face, covered in a full coverage black mask with no openings, but tight, so you can see his facial expressions.  He watches calmly as [[JACK]], having finished donning the costume, is admiring himself in the mirror.  He holds out one of his hands and a wisp of white flame plays about his fingertips.
INT DAY Boarding House Room


;traveler
Same angle, JACK has put the boots on, and is donning the gloves, however now, TRAVELLER occupies the armchair we see in the reflection.  For the most part, he is dressed in ordinary clothes: a button-down shirt, slacks, a belt, a trench coat loose and open over all of that, standard-looking shoes -- but all sooty black.  Under his clothes, however, TRAVELLER wears a skin-tight, all-black costume: of course this only shows with his hands, which are covered in sheer black gloves, and his face, covered in a full coverage black mask with no openings, but tight, so you can see his facial expressions.  He watches calmly as JACK, having finished donning the costume, is admiring himself in the mirror.  He holds out one of his hands and a wisp of white flame plays about his fingertips.
:All dressed?


;jack
TRAVELER
:Aaaaahhh!
All dressed?


As [[JACK]] yelps, he spins around to face [[THE TRAVELLER]].
JACK
Aaaaahhh!


<scene int day>Boarding House Room</scene>
As JACK yelps, he spins around to face TRAVELLER.


[[JACK]] tries to collect himself.
INT DAY Boarding House Room


;jack
JACK tries to collect himself.
:Who are (beat) What (beat) How'd you get in here?


;traveler
JACK
:I am called The Traveler.  As for how I came to be here -- I go where I wish.
Who are (beat) What (beat) How'd you get in here?


;jack
TRAVELER
:What do you want?
I am called The Traveler.  As for how I came to be here -- I go where I wish.


;traveler
JACK
:I'm here to warn you.  You're going to stop.
What do you want?


;jack
TRAVELER
:Stop what?
I'm here to warn you.  You're going to stop.


;traveler
JACK
:That costume.  You've just put it on for the first time --
Stop what?


;jack
TRAVELER
:How did dyou k--
That costume.  You've just put it on for the first time --


;traveler
JACK
:But you can't.  You mustn't.
How did you k--


;jack
TRAVELER
:Listen, I don't know w--
But you can't.  You mustn't.


;traveler
JACK
:You control flame, don't you Jack?  So you're probably planning to call yourself "Human Fire" or "Starblazer" or something like that...
Listen, I don't know w--


;jack
TRAVELER
:Conflagration.
You control flame, don't you Jack?  So you're probably planning to call yourself "Human Fire" or "Starblazer" or something like that...


[[THE TRAVELLER]] nods approvingly
JACK
Conflagration.


;traveler
THE TRAVELLER nods approvingly
:Conflagration.  Wonderful. (beat) You control flame, and you think that you, Conflagration, are going to be the first ever real-life, honest-to-God superhero.


[[JACK]] sits down on the bed with a smirk, thinking it's a simple power struggle situation
TRAVELER
Conflagration.  Wonderful. (beat) You control flame, and you think that you, Conflagration, are going to be the first ever real-life, honest-to-God superhero.


;jack
JACK sits down on the bed with a smirk, thinking it's a simple power struggle situation
:OK, I get it.  I'm not the <i>first</i>, right?  <i>You're</i> the first superhero.


;traveler
JACK
:No.  I'm not the first superhero. (beat) I'm the last.
OK, I get it.  I'm not the *first*, right?  *You're* the first superhero.


[[JACK]] is confused.
TRAVELER
No.  I'm not the first superhero. (beat) I'm the last.


;traveler
JACK is confused.
:Have you ever wondered why there aren't any superheores?  Real superheroes?


;jack
TRAVELER
:I always assumed that no one got superpowers--
Have you ever wondered why there aren't any superheores?  Real superheroes?


;traveler
JACK
:You got them.  Why wouldn't others?  Do you think you are that unique?
I always assumed that no one got superpowers--


;traveler
TRAVELER
:Anyway, why should it matter? You read comics as a kid. Batman didn't have superpowers. Captain America didn't have superpowers. Lots of superheroes had no powers. So why aren't there any real superheroes? (beat) Because I stopped them. Like I'm stopping you.
You got them. Why wouldn't others? Do you think you are that unique?


;jack
TRAVELER
:Sounds more like you're a super<i>villain</i>.
Anyway, why should it matter? You read comics as a kid. Batman didn't have superpowers. Captain America didn't have superpowers. Lots of superheroes had no powers. So why aren't there any real superheroes? (beat) Because I stopped them. Like I'm stopping you.


;traveler
JACK
:Call me what you wish.  But you <i>will</i> stop.
Sounds more like you're a super*villain*.


<scene ext day>Farmer's Market</scene>
TRAVELER
Call me what you wish.  But you *will* stop.


A [[MIDDLE AGED MAN]] is lifting a box of fruit up onto a table into an empty spot, obviously replacing an empty one, as shoppers browse the fruits and vegetables at his and nearby booths.
EXT DAY Farmer's Market


;traveler (V.O.)
A MIDDLE AGED MAN is lifting a box of fruit up onto a table into an empty spot, obviously replacing an empty one, as shoppers browse the fruits and vegetables at his and nearby booths.
:Right now, somewhere in Kansas, there's a man who could raise a mountain above his head who never lifts anything heavier than a fruit basket.


<scene int day>Community Center</scene>
TRAVELER (V.O.)
Right now, somewhere in Kansas, there's a man who could raise a mountain above his head who never lifts anything heavier than a fruit basket.


An older [[CHINESE WOMAN]] is playing cards with a few other similar women, other groups are around them doing the same thing.  This woman is clearly trying to decide which card to play next, and clearly focussed on her own cards, not the other women in the group.
INT DAY Community Center


;traveler (V.O.)
An older CHINESE WOMAN is playing cards with a few other similar women, other groups are around them doing the same thing. This woman is clearly trying to decide which card to play next, and clearly focussed on her own cards, not the other women in the group.
:There's a woman in China who can read minds, but has only done so once.


<scene ext day>A Beach Sidewalk in Brazil</scene>
TRAVELER (V.O.)
There's a woman in China who can read minds, but has only done so once.


A 30-something [[BRAZILIAN MAN]] jogs casually along, taking in the scenery around him, as other joggers pass him by with rather more gusto.
EXT DAY A Beach Sidewalk in Brazil


;traveler (V.O.)
A 30-something BRAZILIAN MAN jogs casually along, taking in the scenery around him, as other joggers pass him by with rather more gusto.
:There's someone in Brazil who can run faster than the speed of sound who never does more than a plodding jog.


<scene ext day>Recreational Soccer Field in Turkey</scene>
TRAVELER (V.O.)
There's someone in Brazil who can run faster than the speed of sound who never does more than a plodding jog.
 
EXT DAY Recreational Soccer Field in Turkey


As most members of a neighborhood soccer team stretch and warm up in preparation for a game, one man sits on the bench nearby, merely watching.
As most members of a neighborhood soccer team stretch and warm up in preparation for a game, one man sits on the bench nearby, merely watching.


;traveler (V.O.)
TRAVELER (V.O.)
:And someone else living in Turkey whose body can stretch and distort itself like a piece of rubber who won't even do warm-up stretches before a soccer match to keep from slipping up. (beat> They all live without their powers.  All live normal, everyday, mundane lives.  Just as you will.
And someone else living in Turkey whose body can stretch and distort itself like a piece of rubber who won't even do warm-up stretches before a soccer match to keep from slipping up. (beat> They all live without their powers.  All live normal, everyday, mundane lives.  Just as you will.


<scene int day>Boarding House Room</scene>
INT DAY Boarding House Room


[[JACK]] is still sitting on the bed, defiant, but a nervous.
JACK is still sitting on the bed, defiant, but a nervous.


;jack
JACK
:And how exactly do you plan to stop me?
And how exactly do you plan to stop me?


;traveler
TRAVELER
:With words.  I'll tell you a tale, and you'll stop.
With words.  I'll tell you a tale, and you'll stop.


The two stare at each other, [[JACK]] considering what to make of the other.
The two stare at each other, JACK considering what to make of the other.


;traveler
TRAVELER
:Come, now. It can't hurt to listen. You want to solve everything with punches and bolts of flame?
Come, now. It can't hurt to listen. You want to solve everything with punches and bolts of flame?


;jack
JACK
:Yeah, okay, I'm listening.
Yeah, okay, I'm listening.


;traveler
TRAVELER
:When I grew up, there were lots of superheroes. Supervillains. Super people with a morally ambiguous status.  Supers everywhere, of every variety.  I read about them, of course, but not like you did -- not in the comics.  We read about them in newspapers, but more than that: we heard the roar of their fire in the distance.  Heard the explosions, like bombs.
When I grew up, there were lots of superheroes. Supervillains. Super people with a morally ambiguous status.  Supers everywhere, of every variety.  I read about them, of course, but not like you did -- not in the comics.  We read about them in newspapers, but more than that: we heard the roar of their fire in the distance.  Heard the explosions, like bombs.
</fountain>

Latest revision as of 20:46, 5 April 2016

http://www.stephenfrug.com describes a comic book with a creative commons license, but I'm more interested in movies, so this is an adapation:

<fountain>

Title: Continuity Author: Stephen Frug

INT DAY Boarding House Room

JACK a.k.a. Conflagration, a fit young man, early 20's, sits on the corner of a well made bed in the back of his boarding house room. He's wearing only briefs, holding a COSTUME loose in his hands. In front of him is a closed closet door, with a FULL LENGTH MIRROR on it. The man looking both at the costume and, beyond it, at the mirror. In the mirror, rather than an accurate reflection of the scene before us, we see the man actually wearing the costume, in a heroic pose. The costume itself is, pretty standard superhero fare: a skintight costume covering all but the eyes and jaw, in a standard two-color scheme: white with gold gloves, boots, belt, insignia, etc. The insignia is a starburst or flame of some sort, to go with his name and power. JACK is considering how he'll look in the costume as opening theme/credits play.

Behind JACK, in the front of the room, TRAVELER is sitting in a chair. We are looking over his shoulder, so that all we see is his shoulder, an arm, the back of his head. So far as we can see, he is dressed all in black: black clothes, black mask. He is a brooding, ominous presence, one that the brighter and sunnier (though pensive) man he watches is utterly unaware of.

On the floor between them is the shadow of TRAVELER, stretching out toward JACK... except that, instead of an ordinary shadow, we see, as a simple, shadow-colored SILHOUETTE, a collage of the incidents described later: TRAVELER preventing the rise of the heroes and villains of entire world.

INT DAY Boarding House Room

JACK is pensive; he holds up the costume by the shoulders and looks it over, then with grim determination, starts putting on the costume.

INT DAY Boarding House Room

From low, looking up at the mirror, we see JACK finishing donning his costume by putting on his boots, leaving only the gloves for last. In the reflection, we can see an ARMCHAIR at the front of the room, empty.

INT DAY Boarding House Room

Same angle, JACK has put the boots on, and is donning the gloves, however now, TRAVELLER occupies the armchair we see in the reflection. For the most part, he is dressed in ordinary clothes: a button-down shirt, slacks, a belt, a trench coat loose and open over all of that, standard-looking shoes -- but all sooty black. Under his clothes, however, TRAVELLER wears a skin-tight, all-black costume: of course this only shows with his hands, which are covered in sheer black gloves, and his face, covered in a full coverage black mask with no openings, but tight, so you can see his facial expressions. He watches calmly as JACK, having finished donning the costume, is admiring himself in the mirror. He holds out one of his hands and a wisp of white flame plays about his fingertips.

TRAVELER All dressed?

JACK Aaaaahhh!

As JACK yelps, he spins around to face TRAVELLER.

INT DAY Boarding House Room

JACK tries to collect himself.

JACK Who are (beat) What (beat) How'd you get in here?

TRAVELER I am called The Traveler. As for how I came to be here -- I go where I wish.

JACK What do you want?

TRAVELER I'm here to warn you. You're going to stop.

JACK Stop what?

TRAVELER That costume. You've just put it on for the first time --

JACK How did you k--

TRAVELER But you can't. You mustn't.

JACK Listen, I don't know w--

TRAVELER You control flame, don't you Jack? So you're probably planning to call yourself "Human Fire" or "Starblazer" or something like that...

JACK Conflagration.

THE TRAVELLER nods approvingly

TRAVELER Conflagration. Wonderful. (beat) You control flame, and you think that you, Conflagration, are going to be the first ever real-life, honest-to-God superhero.

JACK sits down on the bed with a smirk, thinking it's a simple power struggle situation

JACK OK, I get it. I'm not the *first*, right? *You're* the first superhero.

TRAVELER No. I'm not the first superhero. (beat) I'm the last.

JACK is confused.

TRAVELER Have you ever wondered why there aren't any superheores? Real superheroes?

JACK I always assumed that no one got superpowers--

TRAVELER You got them. Why wouldn't others? Do you think you are that unique?

TRAVELER Anyway, why should it matter? You read comics as a kid. Batman didn't have superpowers. Captain America didn't have superpowers. Lots of superheroes had no powers. So why aren't there any real superheroes? (beat) Because I stopped them. Like I'm stopping you.

JACK Sounds more like you're a super*villain*.

TRAVELER Call me what you wish. But you *will* stop.

EXT DAY Farmer's Market

A MIDDLE AGED MAN is lifting a box of fruit up onto a table into an empty spot, obviously replacing an empty one, as shoppers browse the fruits and vegetables at his and nearby booths.

TRAVELER (V.O.) Right now, somewhere in Kansas, there's a man who could raise a mountain above his head who never lifts anything heavier than a fruit basket.

INT DAY Community Center

An older CHINESE WOMAN is playing cards with a few other similar women, other groups are around them doing the same thing. This woman is clearly trying to decide which card to play next, and clearly focussed on her own cards, not the other women in the group.

TRAVELER (V.O.) There's a woman in China who can read minds, but has only done so once.

EXT DAY A Beach Sidewalk in Brazil

A 30-something BRAZILIAN MAN jogs casually along, taking in the scenery around him, as other joggers pass him by with rather more gusto.

TRAVELER (V.O.) There's someone in Brazil who can run faster than the speed of sound who never does more than a plodding jog.

EXT DAY Recreational Soccer Field in Turkey

As most members of a neighborhood soccer team stretch and warm up in preparation for a game, one man sits on the bench nearby, merely watching.

TRAVELER (V.O.) And someone else living in Turkey whose body can stretch and distort itself like a piece of rubber who won't even do warm-up stretches before a soccer match to keep from slipping up. (beat> They all live without their powers. All live normal, everyday, mundane lives. Just as you will.

INT DAY Boarding House Room

JACK is still sitting on the bed, defiant, but a nervous.

JACK And how exactly do you plan to stop me?

TRAVELER With words. I'll tell you a tale, and you'll stop.

The two stare at each other, JACK considering what to make of the other.

TRAVELER Come, now. It can't hurt to listen. You want to solve everything with punches and bolts of flame?

JACK Yeah, okay, I'm listening.

TRAVELER When I grew up, there were lots of superheroes. Supervillains. Super people with a morally ambiguous status. Supers everywhere, of every variety. I read about them, of course, but not like you did -- not in the comics. We read about them in newspapers, but more than that: we heard the roar of their fire in the distance. Heard the explosions, like bombs. </fountain>