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Title: Hitchin' Onto Fear | |||
Author: Alan Batie | |||
INT DAY INSIDE LEO'S CAR | |||
LEO, a 30ish, average looking guy (not ugly by any means, | LEO, a 30ish, average looking guy (not ugly by any means, | ||
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nowhere. | nowhere. | ||
LEO | |||
Huh. | |||
EXT DAY WASTELAND | |||
Three or four bandits, dressed all in black, except for the | Three or four bandits, dressed all in black, except for the | ||
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an old Western. | an old Western. | ||
EXT DAY WASTELAND | |||
Now the bandits are chasing Leo's car down the highway. | Now the bandits are chasing Leo's car down the highway. | ||
Leo is terrified, as they're shooting at him. | Leo is terrified, as they're shooting at him. | ||
EXT DAY WASTELAND | |||
The car is replaced with a Hummer. Someone else is | The car is replaced with a Hummer. Someone else is | ||
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passenger window. They drop back and stop chasing him. | passenger window. They drop back and stop chasing him. | ||
EXT DAY WASTELAND | |||
JOE, the hiker, is walking along the road. He's wearing a | JOE, the hiker, is walking along the road. He's wearing a | ||
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out his thumb. | out his thumb. | ||
EXT DAY WASTELAND | |||
We're now watching Leo's car approach in the distance. | We're now watching Leo's car approach in the distance. | ||
EXT DAY WASTELAND | |||
Leo's car pulls up and stops. We go up to the door and | Leo's car pulls up and stops. We go up to the door and | ||
open it. A BUFF HUNK is stark naked in the driver's seat. | open it. A BUFF HUNK is stark naked in the driver's seat. | ||
BUFF HUNK | |||
Hop in! Where ya headed? | |||
EXT DAY WASTELAND | |||
Leo's car is still approaching in the distance. | Leo's car is still approaching in the distance. | ||
INT DAY Leo's Car | |||
We're getting close enough to see that JOE has potential. | We're getting close enough to see that JOE has potential. | ||
INT DAY Leo's Car | |||
The car is stopped, and BUFF HUNK opens the door, strips | The car is stopped, and BUFF HUNK opens the door, strips | ||
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out here. | out here. | ||
INT DAY Leo's Car | |||
As we pass JOE, LEO slams on the brakes and stops for him. | As we pass JOE, LEO slams on the brakes and stops for him. | ||
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seat and hops in. | seat and hops in. | ||
JOE | |||
Hey, thanks! It was getting pretty hot out there. | |||
LEO | |||
Where are you going? | |||
Leo starts the car moving and they drive down the road. | Leo starts the car moving and they drive down the road. | ||
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Latest revision as of 21:37, 4 April 2016
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Title: Hitchin' Onto Fear Author: Alan Batie
INT DAY INSIDE LEO'S CAR
LEO, a 30ish, average looking guy (not ugly by any means, but would be ignored when he walked into a room), is driving a small hatchback-type car (something practical, yet still has a little fun in it) along a flat, barren, deserted section of road. A small speck in the distance just becomes recognizable as a hitchiker out here in the middle of nowhere.
LEO Huh.
EXT DAY WASTELAND
Three or four bandits, dressed all in black, except for the classic red bandannas over their faces, are chasing a stagecoach through a barren wasteland similar to where Leo is while he's imagining this --- a classic chase scene from an old Western.
EXT DAY WASTELAND
Now the bandits are chasing Leo's car down the highway. Leo is terrified, as they're shooting at him.
EXT DAY WASTELAND
The car is replaced with a Hummer. Someone else is driving, and Leo is shooting back at the bandits out the passenger window. They drop back and stop chasing him.
EXT DAY WASTELAND
JOE, the hiker, is walking along the road. He's wearing a tank-top, revealing nicely defined arms and a face with potential. No Brad Pitt, but nice enough. We hear THE CAR coming up behind us. JOE stops and turns around and sticks out his thumb.
EXT DAY WASTELAND
We're now watching Leo's car approach in the distance.
EXT DAY WASTELAND
Leo's car pulls up and stops. We go up to the door and open it. A BUFF HUNK is stark naked in the driver's seat.
BUFF HUNK Hop in! Where ya headed?
EXT DAY WASTELAND
Leo's car is still approaching in the distance.
INT DAY Leo's Car
We're getting close enough to see that JOE has potential.
INT DAY Leo's Car
The car is stopped, and BUFF HUNK opens the door, strips naked and hops in. He is definitely nice enough.
BUFF HUNK Thanks! I hope you don't mind, these are a bit dirty and it's hot out here.
INT DAY Leo's Car
As we pass JOE, LEO slams on the brakes and stops for him. JOE runs up, opens the door, tosses his backpack in the back seat and hops in.
JOE Hey, thanks! It was getting pretty hot out there.
LEO Where are you going?
Leo starts the car moving and they drive down the road.
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