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This came about mainly from wanting to rationalize vampire mythology with a plausible mechanism ([[background notes]]):
This came about mainly from wanting to rationalize vampire mythology with a plausible mechanism ([[background notes]]):


              EXT. CITY STREET -- EVENING
<fountain>
Title: Blood Will Tell
Author: Alan Batie


              Alex picks up Ben
EXT EVENING CITY STREET


              INT. - ALEX'S BEDROOM -- EVENING
Alex picks up Ben


              Alex is fucking Ben.
INT EVENING ALEX'S BEDROOM


                                    BEN
Alex is fucking Ben.
                        Ah!  Ah!  Ah!  Oh no!  Don't make
                        me...  Ahhhhhhhh!


              Ben's warning is too late: they both cum together, and in
BEN
              first of the orgasmic convulsions, Ben pulls Alex down to
Ah!  Ah!  Ah!  Oh no! Don't make me...  Ahhhhhhhh!
              him and bites Alex on the neck, holding him there clenched
              and biting through the duration of the orgasm. As the
              orgasmic convulsions wear off, Alex's take on the chaotic
              form of real convulsions, growing back in intensity.
              Keeping clenched, but releasing the bite (revealing a
              moderate amount of blood), Ben rolls over on top of Alex,
              holding him down until the convulsions subsideHe
              collapses in place on Alex, sobbing.


                                    BEN (CONT'D)
Ben's warning is too late they both cum together, and in
                        Not another one!  
first of the orgasmic convulsions, Ben pulls Alex down to
him and bites Alex on the neck, holding him there clenched
and biting through the duration of the orgasm.  As the
orgasmic convulsions wear off, Alex's take on the chaotic
form of real convulsions, growing back in intensity. 
Keeping clenched, but releasing the bite (revealing a
moderate amount of blood), Ben rolls over on top of Alex,
holding him down until the convulsions subside. He
collapses in place on Alex, sobbing.


              INT. ALEX'S BEDROOM -- EVENING
BEN
(Cont'd)
Not another one! 


              Ben is sitting in a chair, head down, next to Alex, who is
INT EVENING ALEX'S BEDROOM
              still lying on the bed.  Both are still naked and little
              appears to have changed beyond Ben's moving to the chair,
              and there is a KNIFE on the nightstand.  Alex stirs.


                                    ALEX
Ben is sitting in a chair, head down, next to Alex, who is
                              (groggy)
still lying on the bed.  Both are still naked and little
                        Owww, what happened?
appears to have changed beyond Ben's moving to the chair,  
and there is a KNIFE on the nightstand.  Alex stirs.


              Alex notices Ben sitting there as he becomes more lucid.
ALEX
(groggy)
Owww, what happened?


                                    ALEX (CONT'D)
Alex notices Ben sitting there as he becomes more lucid.
                        Man, did you really bite me?  Gawd,
                        what's that stench?


                                    BEN
ALEX
                        How do you feel?
(Cont'd)
Man, did you really bite me?  Gawd, what's that stench?


                                    ALEX
BEN
                        Like my body has been torn apart
How do you feel?
                        and put back together..


                                    BEN
ALEX
                              (muttering)
Like my body has been torn apart and put back together..
                        It has


                                    ALEX
BEN
                        And it stinks like it too!  What?
(muttering)
It has


                                    BEN
ALEX
                        Look, trust me --- I'll make sure
And it stinks like it too! What?
                        no harm comes to you. Go back to
                        sleep and I'll explain everything
                        when you've recovered more.


                                    ALEX
BEN
                        OK, the fact that there is
Look, trust me --- I'll make sure no harm comes to you.  Go back to sleep and I'll explain everything when you've recovered more.
                        something to explain means that
                        there's not a chance I'll be able to  
                        go back to sleep until I know what's
                        going on.  My whole body is aching,
                        but somehow it feels better than
                        ever despite that, so spill it. 
                        What the hell's going on here?  You
                        did bite me...


              Alex feels his neck --- nothing.
ALEX
OK, the fact that there is something to explain means that there's not a chance I'll be able to go back to sleep until I know what's going on.  My whole body is aching, but somehow it feels better than ever despite that, so spill it.  What the hell's going on here?  You did bite me...


                                    ALEX (CONT'D)
Alex feels his neck --- nothing.
                        Odd, I'd have sworn you practically
                        ripped out my throat.  I'd better
                        not have a hicky though...


                                    BEN
ALEX (CONT'D)
                        Look, I'm sorry, I didn't mean for
Odd, I'd have sworn you practically ripped out my throat.  I'd better not have a hicky though...
                        it to happenIt's just that I  
                        didn't expect it --- no one's made
                        me cum fucking me in...well, a very
                        long time.


                                    ALEX
BEN
                        What's that got to do with it?
Look, I'm sorry, I didn't mean for it to happen.  It's just that I didn't expect it --- no one's made me cum fucking me in...well, a very long time.


                                    BEN
ALEX
                        All right, but first, so you'll
What's that got to do with it?
                        believe it's real...


              Ben picks up the knife on the nightstand and quickly cuts
BEN
              his arm, then holds up the cut so Alex can see it heal in
All right, but first, so you'll believe it's real...
              seconds.


                                    ALEX
Ben picks up the knife on the nightstand and quickly cuts
                        Whoa...how'd you do that?
his arm, then holds up the cut so Alex can see it heal in
seconds.


                                    BEN
ALEX
                        Please don't freak out now, most of
Whoa...how'd you do that?
                        what you've heard about us is wrong.
                        I'm a vampire.  And now so are you.


                                    ALEX
BEN
                        Yeah, right, and I'm the queen of
Please don't freak out now, most of what you've heard about us is wrong.  I'm a vampire.  And now so are you.
                        England.


              Ben, with the knife still in his hand reaches over and  
ALEX
              slashes Alex's arm.
Yeah, right, and I'm the queen of England.


                                    ALEX (CONT'D)
Ben, with the knife still in his hand reaches over and
                        Ouch!  What the...
slashes Alex's arm.


              Alex's arm heals about half as fast as Ben's did --- still very fast though.
ALEX
(Cont'd)
Ouch!  What the...


                                    ALEX (CONT'D)
Alex's arm heals about half as fast as Ben's did --- still very fast though.
                        Fuck me.


                                    BEN
ALEX
                              (smiling)
(Cont'd)
                        Not yet, you need to recover some
Fuck me.
                        more.


                                    ALEX
BEN
                        Very funny.
(smiling)
                              (beat)
Not yet, you need to recover some more.
                        Shit. I liked the sun.  And I
                        can't very well go around killing
                        people.  How am I supposed to
                        survive?  How do you survive?


                                    BEN
ALEX
                        There is a network of farms that
Very funny.
                        cater to our needs, but in a pinch,
(beat)
                        you can feed directly from animals.
Shit.  I liked the sun.  And I can't very well go around killing people. How am I supposed to survive?  How do you survive?


                                    ALEX
BEN
                        How do I keep from creating a herd
There is a network of farms that cater to our needs, but in a pinch, you can feed directly from animals.
                        of vampire animals?


                                    BEN
ALEX
                        You have to  
How do I keep from creating a herd of vampire animals?
                        explicitly want to make a vampire,  
 
                        unless you're having sex, then it's  
BEN
                        unfortunately reflexive.  You'll learn how to consciously
You have to explicitly want to make a vampire, unless you're having sex, then it's reflexive, unfortunately.  You'll learn how to consciously control your fangs, which inject the virus.  Obviously, it's not something done lightly, and I didn't mean to do it to you.  Sorry about that...
control your fangs, which inject the virus.  Obviously, it's not something done lightly, and I didn't mean to do it to you.  Sorry about that...
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Latest revision as of 21:21, 4 April 2016

This came about mainly from wanting to rationalize vampire mythology with a plausible mechanism (background notes):

<fountain> Title: Blood Will Tell Author: Alan Batie

EXT EVENING CITY STREET

Alex picks up Ben

INT EVENING ALEX'S BEDROOM

Alex is fucking Ben.

BEN Ah! Ah! Ah! Oh no! Don't make me... Ahhhhhhhh!

Ben's warning is too late they both cum together, and in first of the orgasmic convulsions, Ben pulls Alex down to him and bites Alex on the neck, holding him there clenched and biting through the duration of the orgasm. As the orgasmic convulsions wear off, Alex's take on the chaotic form of real convulsions, growing back in intensity. Keeping clenched, but releasing the bite (revealing a moderate amount of blood), Ben rolls over on top of Alex, holding him down until the convulsions subside. He collapses in place on Alex, sobbing.

BEN (Cont'd) Not another one!

INT EVENING ALEX'S BEDROOM

Ben is sitting in a chair, head down, next to Alex, who is still lying on the bed. Both are still naked and little appears to have changed beyond Ben's moving to the chair, and there is a KNIFE on the nightstand. Alex stirs.

ALEX (groggy) Owww, what happened?

Alex notices Ben sitting there as he becomes more lucid.

ALEX (Cont'd) Man, did you really bite me? Gawd, what's that stench?

BEN How do you feel?

ALEX Like my body has been torn apart and put back together..

BEN (muttering) It has

ALEX And it stinks like it too! What?

BEN Look, trust me --- I'll make sure no harm comes to you. Go back to sleep and I'll explain everything when you've recovered more.

ALEX OK, the fact that there is something to explain means that there's not a chance I'll be able to go back to sleep until I know what's going on. My whole body is aching, but somehow it feels better than ever despite that, so spill it. What the hell's going on here? You did bite me...

Alex feels his neck --- nothing.

ALEX (CONT'D) Odd, I'd have sworn you practically ripped out my throat. I'd better not have a hicky though...

BEN Look, I'm sorry, I didn't mean for it to happen. It's just that I didn't expect it --- no one's made me cum fucking me in...well, a very long time.

ALEX What's that got to do with it?

BEN All right, but first, so you'll believe it's real...

Ben picks up the knife on the nightstand and quickly cuts his arm, then holds up the cut so Alex can see it heal in seconds.

ALEX Whoa...how'd you do that?

BEN Please don't freak out now, most of what you've heard about us is wrong. I'm a vampire. And now so are you.

ALEX Yeah, right, and I'm the queen of England.

Ben, with the knife still in his hand reaches over and slashes Alex's arm.

ALEX (Cont'd) Ouch! What the...

Alex's arm heals about half as fast as Ben's did --- still very fast though.

ALEX (Cont'd) Fuck me.

BEN (smiling) Not yet, you need to recover some more.

ALEX Very funny. (beat) Shit. I liked the sun. And I can't very well go around killing people. How am I supposed to survive? How do you survive?

BEN There is a network of farms that cater to our needs, but in a pinch, you can feed directly from animals.

ALEX How do I keep from creating a herd of vampire animals?

BEN You have to explicitly want to make a vampire, unless you're having sex, then it's reflexive, unfortunately. You'll learn how to consciously control your fangs, which inject the virus. Obviously, it's not something done lightly, and I didn't mean to do it to you. Sorry about that... </fountain>