BoF: The Beginning - Revision history

AlanBatie at 08:18, 16 October 2016

2016-10-16T08:18:41Z

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 JAY
 OK
 FADE OUT.

AlanBatie at 07:59, 12 October 2016

2016-10-12T07:59:38Z

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	The boys wake up with a start, lift up the covers and look down, then drop the covers and remove their pajama bottoms and briefs, respectively, and toss them out from under the covers onto the floor.		The boys wake up with a start, lift up the covers and look down, then drop the covers and remove their pajama bottoms and briefs, respectively, and toss them out from under the covers onto the floor.

	JAY AND SCOTT (~~simultaneously~~)		JAY AND SCOTT (SIMULTANEOUSLY)
	Ewwwwww		Ewwwwww

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	What? How... well, yes, I heard...		What? How... well, yes, I heard...

	JAY AND SCOTT (~~simultaneously~~)		JAY AND SCOTT (SIMULTANEOUSLY)
	...Roy say he was going to do it last week.		...Roy say he was going to do it last week.

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	Where you told me about it? Yes.		Where you told me about it? Yes.

	JAY AND SCOTT (~~simultaneously~~)		JAY AND SCOTT (SIMULTANEOUSLY)
	Holy crap!		Holy crap!

AlanBatie at 07:58, 12 October 2016

2016-10-12T07:58:32Z

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	The boys wake up with a start, lift up the covers and look down, then drop the covers and remove their pajama bottoms and briefs, respectively, and toss them out from under the covers onto the floor.		The boys wake up with a start, lift up the covers and look down, then drop the covers and remove their pajama bottoms and briefs, respectively, and toss them out from under the covers onto the floor.

	JAY ~~and~~ SCOTT (simultaneously)		JAY AND SCOTT (simultaneously)
	Ewwwwww		Ewwwwww

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	What? How... well, yes, I heard...		What? How... well, yes, I heard...

	JAY ~~and~~ SCOTT (simultaneously)		JAY AND SCOTT (simultaneously)
	...Roy say he was going to do it last week.		...Roy say he was going to do it last week.

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	Where you told me about it? Yes.		Where you told me about it? Yes.

	JAY ~~and~~ SCOTT (simultaneously)		JAY AND SCOTT (simultaneously)
	Holy crap!		Holy crap!

AlanBatie at 07:57, 12 October 2016

2016-10-12T07:57:38Z

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	Where you told me about it? Yes.		Where you told me about it? Yes.

	JAY/SCOTT		JAY and SCOTT (simultaneously)
	Holy crap!		Holy crap!

AlanBatie at 07:57, 12 October 2016

2016-10-12T07:57:21Z

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	The boys wake up with a start, lift up the covers and look down, then drop the covers and remove their pajama bottoms and briefs, respectively, and toss them out from under the covers onto the floor.		The boys wake up with a start, lift up the covers and look down, then drop the covers and remove their pajama bottoms and briefs, respectively, and toss them out from under the covers onto the floor.

	JAY / SCOTT		JAY and SCOTT (simultaneously)
	Ewwwwww		Ewwwwww

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	What? How... well, yes, I heard...		What? How... well, yes, I heard...

	JAY/SCOTT		JAY and SCOTT (simultaneously)
	...Roy say he was going to do it last week.		...Roy say he was going to do it last week.

AlanBatie at 07:56, 12 October 2016

2016-10-12T07:56:46Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 00:56, 12 October 2016
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	The boys wake up with a start, lift up the covers and look down, then drop the covers and remove their pajama bottoms and briefs, respectively, and toss them out from under the covers onto the floor.		The boys wake up with a start, lift up the covers and look down, then drop the covers and remove their pajama bottoms and briefs, respectively, and toss them out from under the covers onto the floor.

	JAY/SCOTT		JAY / SCOTT
	Ewwwwww		Ewwwwww

AlanBatie: Created page with " Title: Birds of a Feather: The Beginning Author: Alan Batie Draft date: 2016-10-12 FADE IN: INT. JAY'S BEDROOM - NIGHT A 12 year old boy wearing pajamas in bed..."

2016-10-12T07:55:00Z

Created page with "<fountain> Title: Birds of a Feather: The Beginning Author: Alan Batie Draft date: 2016-10-12 FADE IN: INT. JAY'S BEDROOM - NIGHT A 12 year old boy wearing pajamas in bed..."

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<fountain>

Title: Birds of a Feather: The Beginning
Author: Alan Batie
Draft date: 2016-10-12

FADE IN:

INT. JAY'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

A 12 year old boy wearing pajamas in bed, asleep.

INT. SCOTT'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

Another 12 year old boy, shirtless, in bed, asleep.

EXT. FOREST MEADOW - DAY

Scott and Jay are walking across a forest meadow shirtless, wearing cut-off jean shorts, all alone. It is a sunny day and birds are singing.

SCOTT
I heard Roy say he was going to pull a fire alarm just as third period starts because he wasn't ready for an algebra test.

JAY
That would suck - third period is my chemistry class and Mr. Stevens is going to make Nitrogen Triiodide tomorrow!

SCOTT
Ahhh, learning the art of explosives! You terrorist you!

Scott attacks Jay and they start wrestling in the grass. Scott ends up on top of Jay and stares down at him for a moment, then bends down and kisses Jay.

INT. JAY'S/SCOTT'S BEDROOMS - NIGHT (SPLIT SCREEN)

The boys wake up with a start, lift up the covers and look down, then drop the covers and remove their pajama bottoms and briefs, respectively, and toss them out from under the covers onto the floor.

JAY/SCOTT
Ewwwwww

INT. SCHOOL CHEMISTRY CLASSROOM - DAY

Jay and other classmates are sitting down at their desks. They quickly settle and look up expectantly at the teacher, Mr. Stevens.

MR. STEVENS
Today, we're going to explore chemical bonding...

The FIRE ALARM goes off. Mr Stevens looks at the alarm indicator in the room, annoyed. Jay is stunned.

MR. STEVENS
OK class, calmly file out to Grouping Area B. Leave your books and backpacks behind, phones are ok.

The class gets up from their desks and start filing out.

EXT. GROUPING AREA B AT ABOUT THE 20 YARD LINE OF THE FOOTBALL FIELD

Jay arrives at the grouping area and notices Scott in the adjacent group. Jay stares at Scott quizzically, and Scott stares back puzzled. They work their way to each other.

JAY
You knew this was going to happen, didn't you?

SCOTT
What? How... well, yes, I heard...

JAY/SCOTT
...Roy say he was going to do it last week.

The boys stare at each other and start blushing.

SCOTT
Did you have a dream last night?

JAY
Where you told me about it? Yes.

JAY/SCOTT
Holy crap!

SCOTT
Let's not talk about this here, if you know what I mean. Can you come over after school and we can try to figure this out.

JAY
OK

FADE OUT.
> The End <

</fountain>