Blood Will Tell - Revision history

AlanBatie at 04:21, 5 April 2016

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	collapses in place on Alex, sobbing.		collapses in place on Alex, sobbing.

	BEN (Cont'd)		BEN
			(Cont'd)
	Not another one!		Not another one!

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	Alex notices Ben sitting there as he becomes more lucid.		Alex notices Ben sitting there as he becomes more lucid.

	ALEX (~~CONT~~'D)		ALEX
			(Cont'd)
	Man, did you really bite me? Gawd, what's that stench?		Man, did you really bite me? Gawd, what's that stench?

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	slashes Alex's arm.		slashes Alex's arm.

	ALEX (~~CONT~~'D)		ALEX
			(Cont'd)
	Ouch! What the...		Ouch! What the...

	Alex's arm heals about half as fast as Ben's did --- still very fast though.		Alex's arm heals about half as fast as Ben's did --- still very fast though.

	ALEX (~~CONT~~'D)		ALEX
			(Cont'd)
	Fuck me.		Fuck me.

AlanBatie at 04:19, 5 April 2016

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	Title Blood Will Tell		Title: Blood Will Tell
	Author Alan Batie		Author: Alan Batie

	EXT EVENING CITY STREET		EXT EVENING CITY STREET

AlanBatie at 04:19, 5 April 2016

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AlanBatie at 02:24, 21 February 2009

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	;BEN		;BEN
	:You have to explicitly want to make a vampire, unless you're having sex, then it's unfortunately ~~reflexive~~. You'll learn how to consciously control your fangs, which inject the virus. Obviously, it's not something done lightly, and I didn't mean to do it to you. Sorry about that...		:You have to explicitly want to make a vampire, unless you're having sex, then it's reflexive, unfortunately. You'll learn how to consciously control your fangs, which inject the virus. Obviously, it's not something done lightly, and I didn't mean to do it to you. Sorry about that...

AlanBatie at 02:22, 21 February 2009

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	;BEN		;BEN (Cont'd)
	:Not another one!		:Not another one!

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	;BEN		;BEN
	(smiling)		:(smiling)
	:Not yet, you need to recover some more.		:Not yet, you need to recover some more.

AlanBatie at 02:18, 21 February 2009

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AlanBatie at 02:02, 21 February 2009

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	explicitly want to make a vampire,		explicitly want to make a vampire,
	unless you're having sex, then it's		unless you're having sex, then it's
	unfortunately reflexive. You'll learn how to consciously		unfortunately reflexive. You'll learn how to consciously control your fangs, which inject the virus. Obviously, it's not something done lightly, and I didn't mean to do it to you. Sorry about that...
	control your fangs, which inject the virus. Obviously, it's not something done lightly, and I didn't mean to do it to you. Sorry about that...

AlanBatie at 02:01, 21 February 2009

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	Ouch! What the...		Ouch! What the...

	Alex's arm heals ~~just~~ as fast as Ben's did.		Alex's arm heals about half as fast as Ben's did --- still very fast though.

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	BEN		BEN
	~~Your new fangs are either straws or~~		You have to
	~~hypodermic needles --- you~~ have to		explicitly want to make a vampire,
	explicitly want to make a vampire.		unless you're having sex, then it's
	~~Unless~~ you're having sex, then it's		unfortunately reflexive. You'll learn how to consciously
	unfortunately reflexive.		control your fangs, which inject the virus. Obviously, it's not something done lightly, and I didn't mean to do it to you. Sorry about that...

AlanBatie: New page: This came about mainly from wanting to rationalize vampire mythology with a plausible mechanism (background notes): EXT. CITY STREET -- EVENING Alex pic...

2009-01-12T11:18:36Z

New page: This came about mainly from wanting to rationalize vampire mythology with a plausible mechanism (background notes): EXT. CITY STREET -- EVENING Alex pic...

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This came about mainly from wanting to rationalize vampire mythology with a plausible mechanism ([[background notes]]):

EXT. CITY STREET -- EVENING

Alex picks up Ben

INT. - ALEX'S BEDROOM -- EVENING

Alex is fucking Ben.

BEN
Ah! Ah! Ah! Oh no! Don't make
me... Ahhhhhhhh!

Ben's warning is too late: they both cum together, and in
first of the orgasmic convulsions, Ben pulls Alex down to
him and bites Alex on the neck, holding him there clenched
and biting through the duration of the orgasm. As the
orgasmic convulsions wear off, Alex's take on the chaotic
form of real convulsions, growing back in intensity.
Keeping clenched, but releasing the bite (revealing a
moderate amount of blood), Ben rolls over on top of Alex,
holding him down until the convulsions subside. He
collapses in place on Alex, sobbing.

BEN (CONT'D)
Not another one!

INT. ALEX'S BEDROOM -- EVENING

Ben is sitting in a chair, head down, next to Alex, who is
still lying on the bed. Both are still naked and little
appears to have changed beyond Ben's moving to the chair,
and there is a KNIFE on the nightstand. Alex stirs.

ALEX
(groggy)
Owww, what happened?

Alex notices Ben sitting there as he becomes more lucid.

ALEX (CONT'D)
Man, did you really bite me? Gawd,
what's that stench?

BEN
How do you feel?

ALEX
Like my body has been torn apart
and put back together..

BEN
(muttering)
It has

ALEX
And it stinks like it too! What?

BEN
Look, trust me --- I'll make sure
no harm comes to you. Go back to
sleep and I'll explain everything
when you've recovered more.

ALEX
OK, the fact that there is
something to explain means that
there's not a chance I'll be able to
go back to sleep until I know what's
going on. My whole body is aching,
but somehow it feels better than
ever despite that, so spill it.
What the hell's going on here? You
did bite me...

Alex feels his neck --- nothing.

ALEX (CONT'D)
Odd, I'd have sworn you practically
ripped out my throat. I'd better
not have a hicky though...

BEN
Look, I'm sorry, I didn't mean for
it to happen. It's just that I
didn't expect it --- no one's made
me cum fucking me in...well, a very
long time.

ALEX
What's that got to do with it?

BEN
All right, but first, so you'll
believe it's real...

Ben picks up the knife on the nightstand and quickly cuts
his arm, then holds up the cut so Alex can see it heal in
seconds.

ALEX
Whoa...how'd you do that?

BEN
Please don't freak out now, most of
what you've heard about us is wrong.
I'm a vampire. And now so are you.

ALEX
Yeah, right, and I'm the queen of
England.

Ben, with the knife still in his hand reaches over and
slashes Alex's arm.

ALEX (CONT'D)
Ouch! What the...

Alex's arm heals just as fast as Ben's did.

ALEX (CONT'D)
Fuck me.

BEN
(smiling)
Not yet, you need to recover some
more.

ALEX
Very funny.
(beat)
Shit. I liked the sun. And I
can't very well go around killing
people. How am I supposed to
survive? How do you survive?

BEN
There is a network of farms that
cater to our needs, but in a pinch,
you can feed directly from animals.

ALEX
How do I keep from creating a herd
of vampire animals?

BEN
Your new fangs are either straws or
hypodermic needles --- you have to
explicitly want to make a vampire.
Unless you're having sex, then it's
unfortunately reflexive.